Sorry, forgot to give this blog a title!
I am currently entertaining myself by revising my very first published novel, MELTING ICE.
MELTING ICE did really well for me when it was first published in 1989 by Mills & Boon. But I now have the copyright back from the publishers, so my first baby is all mine to re-write, update, tinker around with as I wish before sending it out into the world again as an electronically re-mastered edition. Yippee!
But.. aaargh, the clothes! Let me give some examples. In Chapter One, Victoria is practising walking on her hands, wearing denim cut-offs and a baggy green T-shirt. And then Julius, the hero, arrives as she is in mid-hand-stand. OK, think about it. Walking on hands, baggy T-shirt…how is that going to work? I quickly dress her in a tight camisole T-shirt, to preserve her modesty. Now, at least she is not revealing all from the waist…
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